HMD || Crit

[aghostinthemachine]

Something seem off about my characterization? General questions about Mettaton's actions or thoughts? Then post your concerns/critiques here. Anonymous posting is allowed, IPs are off, and comments are screened. Please don't flame/bash. The more you explain things to me, the better I'll understand - and any help/advice is greatly appreciated.

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re: d_p post

[justribbing]

Me: Oh hey look it's a Mettaton--

Me:

Me: he's perfect

[aghostinthemachine]

Sgfafshgs /hides face. Thank you for the compliment! I worry I make him too flirty/sexual sometimes.

[justribbing]

He's outrageous and ridiculous and showy and I LOVE IT.

[aghostinthemachine]

I'm glad you enjoy him. ♥

I shall have him harass your Sans whenever I see him around!